Critiques

  kajspice (4534) 2008-05-14 14:07

very difficult to get details when you have such extremes of dark and light - well done.

  kajspice (4534) 2008-05-14 14:04

Nice picture with beautiful textures - no need for the partial treatment.. I think it would have looked just great without it..

  kajspice (4534) 2008-03-25 11:07

A good representation of the thought...

  kajspice (4534) 2008-03-25 11:04

Hi Ghanshyam,

This picture speaks for itself.. A profound and telling situation. It is an issue, very close to my own heart.. It would be nice to see you nurture this ability to tell a story through your image.. Continue on this thread..

  kajspice (4534) 2008-01-28 16:11

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  kajspice (4534) 2008-01-28 13:07

Hi Prisley,

Thank you very much for all of your thoughts on my work. I appreciate the time which you took to look at them.

Ok, I took a look through your photographs and from the words which you wrote to me, I can see that you are here to learn. Therefore, I will go ahead and tell you exactly what I feel whilst looking through your gallery.

This is the one which stood out the most. As Brenden noted, it is difficult to fully appreciate your vision around this image, as it is mostly someone else's work. What I think is quite nice is the potential story behind what you are showing. I must admit though, it falls just a little short, as did need to read your note before fully understanding what it was you were trying to tell me. The title is a little misguiding, as I was expecting a footprint. The shadow of a man, well.. doesn't look quite like a shadow of a man.. at least not enough to make me really stop and *think* about the issue which you are presenting to me.

The storytelling is a strength here..

  kajspice (4534) 2008-01-15 8:28

coooool! You seem to be in a much better place than last year, personally, I mean. Like you have been able to let go of something. Dare I say it, less anal about your approach. I don't always get what you are trying to tell me, but you always make me think!!

how are you anyway? did you change your number?

  kajspice (4534) 2007-12-13 2:32

I really like your choice of post processing here - There is something really nice about the way the two girls are so prominent in the scene. I like the inclusion of the (ever present) roadworks plastic things.. I think it is a little empty on that side even though you have that couple walking through the area.

  kajspice (4534) 2007-12-12 2:50

only you could carry this off - love it.

  kajspice (4534) 2007-12-08 15:18

excellent!