Critiques

dino94 (440) 2009-05-19 4:20

Hello Joao,

first I will correct a small geographical error (25km), it is not the historical centre of Braga but that this Guimarães.
The shot is traditional, but controlled well on the level of the composition and the exposure, I find right damage that the scan deteriorated the definition of the image.

Regards, Dino.

dino94 (440) 2008-10-21 7:25

Hello Birte,

very beautiful portrait in situation with a splendid expression of the charming saleswoman, but I think that it was necessary to tally less broad by positioning the saleswoman in the right part of the photograph, and to let she living in her environment.
I would have also appreciated a small note on this place or the smiles are generous.

Best regards, Dino.

dino94 (440) 2008-10-21 7:16

Hello Nagarajdh, and welcome on TE.

The scene is interesting, the children in their plays are always interesting and the beautiful light is controlled, but by shifting framing a little more towards the left, the image would be opened and dynamic, by giving more place to the children to play.

Best regards, Dino.

dino94 (440) 2008-10-21 7:08

Hello Tad and welcome on TE.

Your photo has a big problem, that is that it is illegible, one does not manage to determine that it is the principal subject, and the unit is very tumble, with the branch with foreground which merges with the flowers of the tree in the second plan. You would have to open to the maximum your diaphragm to try to isolate a little your principal subject from his environment.

An explanatory note, would have certainly also made it possible to make known to us the place, and to know what you wanted to show to us
Best regards, Dino.

dino94 (440) 2008-10-16 13:55

Bonsoir Jean Luc,

superbe composition et belle maitrise du super grand angle.

Tout simplement magnifique, bravo, Dino

Ps: J'aurais quand même supprimé la trainée d'avion en haut à gauche.

dino94 (440) 2008-10-16 13:37

Hello Luis,

being of Portuguese origin, I cannot resist especially these white frontages which emphasize the glare of the sun and the reverse also, when they are quite exposed, like here.

The only weak point of your photograph is the distortion it objective, to avoid that it is necessary to take a little more retreat, if that is possible, and to choose a more important focal distance, if not there remains postprocessing.

Cordially, Dino

dino94 (440) 2008-10-16 12:42

Hello Ville, welcome on TE.

I will photograph regularly in this corners, and Notre Dame has a hypnotic attraction, which makes that each time I make some photographs of them.

With the wet paving stones, I think that you had advantage to go down on the quays, to benefit from the pattern of those in foreground.

The composition is good and the only reproaches it that I have to make is the adjustment of BdB which is too orange, you would have had to put to you on incandescent.

Regards, Dino.

dino94 (440) 2008-10-16 11:47

Bonjour Raphaël,

L'automne est une saisons aux couleurs magnifiques, comme sur ta photo, et je trouve que ce mur au premier plan prend trop d'importance au premier plan.
Mais dans un autre sens, c'est en accord avec ta note qui dit que c'est certainement le dernier week-end de ces couleurs flamboyantes dans la région, et là le mur semble avancé pour effacer ce magnifique paysage, et faire régner la grisaille.

Belle composition, Dino

  dino94 (440) 2008-07-01 7:26

Hello Albert,

the symbol of unconcern, innocence, and the purity, that childhood, why are we obliged to grow?

Beautiful contribution for peace, and beautiful symbol.

Love and peace, Dino.

  dino94 (440) 2008-07-01 7:15

Bonjour Daniel,

le mur de Berlin, tout un symbole, et il est tombé, maintenant faisons en sorte que tous les autres tombent aussi.
Merci pour la contribution, et surtout, n'oublions jamais.

Love and peace, Dino.