Critiques

chriswhitley (1456) 2009-08-11 13:24

Hello Dominika. Cool shot. I like how you have combined the screen with the backdrop of the city. The silhouettes of the cinema goers are a great touch. All finished off in black and white. Well done. Chris

chriswhitley (1456) 2009-08-10 13:30

Hi Andrew. Not so French chic. A very successful portrait, the dark background assisting greatly as a number have remarked. The dog is a really nice touch. Chris

chriswhitley (1456) 2009-08-10 13:15

Great shot Izabela. The colours are beautiful. Nice depth of field with the children in perfect sharpness and the slightly out of focus background. Really love it, although if I am going to be super critical, maybe a separation between the girl and boy on the right would have been preferable. Very difficult I know when you are trying to capture a moment. Chris

chriswhitley (1456) 2009-08-10 13:09

Hi Victor. Nice use of the carpet in the foreground. A dash of colour to the shot. Chris

chriswhitley (1456) 2009-08-10 13:05

Hello Katrin. I like the point of view chosen for this shot, looking through the washing line?, also the postioning of the unused bench in the foreground. It looks good in b&w. Chris

chriswhitley (1456) 2009-08-04 23:54

Hi Andrew. Glad to note that you enjoyed Honfleur which I know very well. A very typical view but certainly with an added twist. The timing is perfect wth the juggling balls high in the air visible above the building line. Based on your note, do you think the accordionist is thinking he needs to get a new busking partner? Chris

chriswhitley (1456) 2009-08-04 11:58

Hi Chantelle. Beautiful light and silhouettes. The group on the right look as if they are walking on water. A note would be good. What's happening with the group on the left? Chris

chriswhitley (1456) 2009-08-04 11:55

Hi Barbara. I love the silhouette of this group against the menancing sky. Nice how they are just in the clear light with the clouds directly above. Chris

chriswhitley (1456) 2009-08-04 11:52

Hi Milena. A great idea to take a shot of these men in the street and you managed to capture a good moment with the interaction between the man in blue and the man in green. I think I would have made this a landscape (horizontal) shot as there is perhaps too much empty space above. Just the height of the blue door would have been sufficient and maybe a length of empty wall to the lefthand side. Just my humble opinion. Hope you enjoyed Essaouira, one of my favourite places in Morocco. Chris

chriswhitley (1456) 2009-08-02 2:58

Hi Jan. A very powerful shot. The use of the light is superb. Chris