Critiques

albertz (2310) 2009-04-08 6:06

The vertical presentation works well to get an artistic repetition. a smaller aperture may also be considered for the exposure, but still a very good shot.

albertz (2310) 2009-04-08 6:02

Hi Nicolas,
A pleasant composition with those yellow flowers in fg. just a bit bright for my taste but still a very good shot. well done
Albert

albertz (2310) 2009-04-06 21:44

Hi Paul,
Excellent use of desaturation and selective color technique to emphasize the cities means of transportation. Vivid red is a very good choice here. nice work.

albertz (2310) 2009-04-06 21:41

This is an excellent double portrait taking advantage of natural light. the warm brilliance of the image is attractive. i like it a lot Vincent, well done.

albertz (2310) 2009-04-06 21:35

Hi Pascale,
Banana is the latest food fad in Japan, it's simple, cheap and stress free. I like how you added bananas in the foreground to improve the overall image composition. i like it.

albertz (2310) 2009-04-06 21:27

You were not so lucky with the light, despite of that you composed it well. Congratulations!
Regards
Albert

albertz (2310) 2009-04-06 20:21

I like how your framed it naturally, your timing is perfect to get the right amount of light. i would also consider sharpening it a bit for my taste, but still a brilliant shot and composition. well done David. I like it.

albertz (2310) 2009-04-06 20:17

Impressive composition Jusni, appreciate your timing here to get the curvature. The light is perfect, you caught it at the boat. The clouds is a bonus here. Excellent.

albertz (2310) 2009-04-06 20:14

Excellent use of wide angle lens, the effect is striking and stunning, and your composition is brilliant. the luminance is perfect too. Well done Jean.

albertz (2310) 2009-04-06 20:11

Belated welcome to TE John, excellent vantage point and i love the saturation of the blue and green here. well done,
Albert