Critiques

Shahar (215) 2004-02-19 23:27

Repeating forms, different colors - very nice. Was exposure time really 30 seconds? It does not look like night time.
I would try to crop out the sky and upper fence.

Shahar (215) 2004-02-19 23:19

Very nice composition - the framing that repeats itself, the narrow portrait view and the tonal contrast between the man and his surrounding. Also the B&W works here very well.

Shahar (215) 2003-12-06 0:56

A great expression of an abstract term. Like a child saying "I don't want to...". The mist came out very helpful as they blur the background. Nothing like the flexibility one derives from an ultra-zoom camera...

Shahar (215) 2003-12-06 0:48

Well seen and performed. The leaves on the right are somewhat disturbing the symmetry - maybe could be cloned (though I think this is not allowed in TE).

Shahar (215) 2003-12-06 0:43

Great reflections. I also liked the symmetric banks and the people on the bridge. The sky and the water have the same hue, which add some mysterious mood. I think the picture is a bit rotated to the left.

Shahar (215) 2003-12-06 0:31

What appeals to me is the compositional contrast between the vertical rows in the background and the horizontal plane in the foreground, as well as the color contrast betweeen the house and the green around it. I wish the picture vwas larger and sharper so we could see the man more clearly.

Shahar (215) 2003-12-06 0:21

Very nice shot, the yellow light at the end reminds me of 'stairways to heaven"...I wander how it would look if taken so as to center the top.

Shahar (215) 2003-11-23 21:52

Beautiful black and white shot. I'm amazed to see the coloseum without houndreds of people around...The lights on the left are distracting somewhat - maybe try to crop / clone them.

Shahar (215) 2003-11-23 9:43

Very nice observation and a nice use of sun light.

Shahar (215) 2003-11-23 9:39

That's a nice idea for a picture with nice color balance. I wander how it would look like if you took the picture frim the other direction - we may see his face and his head could hide the bag. Also the white poles could then maybe be left outside the frame.