Critiques

Raven (22) 2003-11-01 5:47

I'm sitting here looking at photos with the daugter of a friend of mine, Madelene (7 yrs). She wanted me to tell you that this photo is great and that I just had to put a big green smile on :-D

Raven (22) 2003-10-22 14:25

Nice photo and mixing B/W and a stron color is always effectful.

Allthough you could have been more accurate when masking out the benches as the red floats out.

See the WS for more details

Raven (22) 2003-10-19 9:50

Both Original and final version are nice. I still think it needs some changes so I posted a workshop to explain

Raven (22) 2003-10-18 3:34

The brilliance of this shot is not, in my opinon, the wonderful rainbow but the people in the boat and their undevided attention they give to this light phenomenon.

They look absolutely mesmerized!

Feel free to take a look at my question about rainbows.

Raven (22) 2003-10-17 17:40

I made a Workshop (my first) so sort out the sky and the "ladders" on the roof. I hope you like it.

Raven (22) 2003-10-16 16:36

Strong lines and shapes. Fantastic colors

Raven (22) 2003-10-16 15:25

he he he, Look at the guys footwork... *lmao*

Raven (22) 2003-10-16 14:30

This is truly a beautiful shot, the crisp focus on the cones in the middle while the needles
sourounding them are slightly out of focus.

Simple, clean and beautiful shades of green. Good job!

Raven (22) 2003-10-16 13:59

Acctually I think that the roof line in the foreground is nice as it colormatches the flowerpot on the wall.

I'd concider to crop the right shadow on the wall though.

All in all, it's a beautiful shot.

Raven (22) 2003-10-13 12:37

Oustanding light in this photo! The contrast of having a dawn-like light in the foreground and night-time lurking in the background is really mesmerizing. The orange rays gives it a dreamlike state.

I might consider getting rid of the green and red "bars" on the left wall though.

Bra jobbat!