Critiques

Heaven (0) 2007-09-29 18:57

Hi Nina!

Yes, I like the atmosphere very much! It's mystic and very pleasant to look at. I also like the composition very much with the line of the wall that leads into the picture. I only regret you don't say what kind of postprocessing you applied and I'm interested to know if every effect in the picture is natural...

Kind regards
Markus

Heaven (0) 2007-09-29 18:51

Hi Marina!

It's a surprising picture, and I like it very much! The reflection is wonderful and completes the round. I also like the colors, especially the refreshing turquoise.

Well seen, well done!

Kind regards
Markus

Heaven (0) 2007-09-28 22:48

Hi Sayeed!

And you really found a good point of view! The perspective and the depth are amazing, maybe a little part of a foreground would help to accentuate it. I also like the colors and the subject itself is very interesting, well accompanied by your notes. Just be aware of burnt whites with loss of details as in the clouds on the upper left.

Kind regards
Markus

Heaven (0) 2007-09-28 13:11

Hi Marton!

I like your picture very much. The composition is fine, although the falls are a bit centered. But the nice foreground with the marvellous colors leads into the picture. The whole atmosphere it generates is wonderful, the scenery has something magic. I just would suggest to attenuate the bright tones a bit.

Kind regards
Markus

Heaven (0) 2007-09-28 5:43

Hi Andrzej!

Your picture is the perfect proof to me how much emotions decide whether you like a picture more or less. Above the buildings on the left you can see part of a rock. There is a small trail passing under it, and a couple of weeks ago my wife fell there and badly injured her leg. I had to to carry her on my back...

Your picture shows a very interesting and beautiful landscape, a famous one in Norway at the border of Jotunheimen National Park. It lacks a bit of contrast balance: the bright tones are too bright (some whites are burnt), the dark tones are too dark. But the overall impression is fine. And I'm sure it also remembers you great moments.

Kind regards
Markus

Heaven (0) 2007-09-28 1:51

Cher Nicou!

Tu as vécu et capturé un magnifique début de journée! J'aime beaucoup l'effet des rayons de soleil rendu visible par la brume. Tu as également bien maîtrisé l'exposition, malgré le fait que c'est une prise de vue à contre-jour qui n'est pas facile à réaliser sans brûler les blancs.

Amitiés
Markus

Heaven (0) 2007-09-28 1:47

Hi Mikkel!

You have captured a nice and interesting subject. I like the composition with the lines formed by the ridge on one hand, and by the clouds on the other. I also think it's a good b&w subject.

I regret that your picture lacks from the technical point of view. The contrasts are - from my point of view - too harsh. The bright tones in the clouds are partially burnt with a total loss of details. Your lens or your sensor needs to be cleaned or/and the picture to be postprocessed.

Kind regards
Markus

Heaven (0) 2007-09-28 0:05

Salut Hervé!

Quel joli couple... Photo très résussie et originale. Le sujet plaît, les couleurs sont superbes et la composition, à un petit détail près, est magnifique. Ce détail consiste dans les lignes dérangeantes dans la partie haute (à gauche) de l'image. Personnellement, je couperais l'image pour les enlever ou alors je procéderais à un petit clonage.

Amitiés
Markus

Heaven (0) 2007-09-27 21:57

Hi Jose

It's a surprising an amazing picture! I like the unity of the color tones very much. The composition with the band of brighter green in a diagonal, is great. The overall artistic aspect your picture generates pleases very much. In this particular case I wonder if a little bit of cheating would be allowed: I would fall into temptation and erease the little green bushes on the upper line of the bright green... I can't do a workshop now, but you certainly see what I mean.

Kind regards
Markus

Heaven (0) 2007-09-27 21:37

Hi Philip!

Yes, I really enjoy it! I like your picture very much! The colors and contrasts are fine, just be aware of the burnt whites in the clouds and the total loss of details there.

Your picture pleases to me especially by its composition. You have well equilibrated the three spaces (water, terrain, sky) and the diagonal line of the border that leads into the picture is great.

Well seen, well done!

Kind regards
Markus