Critiques

DaveO (119) 2005-08-14 11:23

I like the colour but the image is just a bit to dark for me. I think it should be rotated sligthly to the right so the horizon appears level. I've take the liberty of doing a workshop

DaveO (119) 2005-08-14 11:04

I realy like the way the water blends into the sky and rock filling up a good portion of the lower left. Do you have a simial image from a slightly different angle that doesn't include the ship and buildings? I find them a bit distracting. The impact of this image is the rock with its grey and green in contrast to the blues.

DaveO (119) 2005-08-14 10:56

What I find most intriguing about this image is the woman at the extreme right. She appears to be staring at something and I wonder what it is. From your notes this was not the intent of the image but to me it of more interest than the poster.
Did you crop anything of the bottom of the image. I would like to see the feet of the people.

DaveO (119) 2004-10-08 22:33

I really like fog pictures. I've been trying for years to capture a really good one but haven't come anywhere close to what you have here. I've never sen fog with a colour like what this is.
My only comment, and a minor point, would be the two black spot close to the building. I would have been tempted to remove them.
A tremendous image.

DaveO (119) 2004-10-08 10:58

Jaap, I agree with jrj; the sky takes away from the overall quality of the image. I think I would crop the image removing most of the sky to just above the tree line.

DaveO (119) 2003-11-25 22:09

A very simple image but I really like it.

DaveO (119) 2003-11-25 22:07

Agreed; the frame is to big. It overpowers what is otherwise a good image. I might be tempted to crop a bit off the right and bottom.

DaveO (119) 2003-11-23 18:07

A good idea for an image. I'd take out the relected lights in the upper left and rotate slightly counter clockwise. I've done a workshop so if you'd permit workshops I'll post it

DaveO (119) 2003-11-22 11:56

This is a really nice sunset I especially like the framing by the leaves at the top of the image.
My only comment is is that my eyes seem to be getting drawn back and forth between the boat and the building on the wharf. I find the building to be distracting. Do you have another shot taken at a slightly different angle where you could remove the wharf? The boat is perfect.

DaveO (119) 2003-11-22 11:48

The simplicity of the composition is perfect and wonderful.