Critiques

CVTJan (1244) 2007-05-05 9:21

Wahooooo! Double thumbs up. Great picture! Dreamy effect, wonderful colours. I can't decide if I would have cut off some of the bottom for better composition... It deserves much more points! Yours, Jan

CVTJan (1244) 2007-05-05 7:41

Hi again,

wonderful objects and comparison. The sun is nice too. Only small flaw is the "thing" on the right would have cut that probable rock off. Thanks for showing. Yours, Jan

CVTJan (1244) 2007-05-05 6:15

Hi Stephen, this looks like a rendered 3D modell of a helicopter sim which I played ages ago. But your picture looks way better ! Thanks for showing and keep on hiking. Incredible depths! Yours, Jan

CVTJan (1244) 2007-05-05 2:57

Hi Stephen, I like the people in the picture they give a nice idea of scale. The scenery is wonderful, would like to go for a walk right now! Good composition and clear view. Yours, Jan

CVTJan (1244) 2007-05-04 7:22

Dear Abdullah, I think you could have chosen a better point of view here. So that the mosque would really be alone. Some meters to the left here and you would have had a better background. In addition you have the mosque in the center which is against the rule of thirds. Otherwise it is really nice to have the sun exactly on it :) Yours, Jan

CVTJan (1244) 2007-05-04 1:35

Dear Jeroen, interesting picture. I clicked several times back and fourth not sure if I should give a comment. Somehow I like it and somehow I don't... At the bottom you have something which I can't identify but you need to get rid of it. I would have also cut off the bar at the top to give more space. Otherwise I like the shadow pattern. Nicely done. Yours, Jan

CVTJan (1244) 2007-05-04 1:21

Dear Oscar,
you chose a good point of view. The angle gives us a nice repetition of the center columns. The contrast of the left and right side is strong and adds to the picture. Warm colours and excellent exposure. It is so easy to get that wrong in these light conditions! Well done. Yours, Jan

CVTJan (1244) 2007-05-03 1:50

Dear Tamer, usually the object centered right in the middle is bad for composition, but here it underlines the desert and is an exemption of the rule. Also interesting are the red colour spots, nice eye catcher. Well done. Yours, Jan
BTW a note is always welcome!

CVTJan (1244) 2007-05-03 1:46

Dear Batu, totally cool point of view! Nice weather, good exposure. The flowers in the foreground add to the picture and are not distracting. I would have cut off the sky a little bit though for better composition. Still great picture. Thanks for showing. Yours, Jan

CVTJan (1244) 2007-05-03 1:44

Dear Luiz, you captured a good moment with the two guys not taking notice of you. The washed out, blurred background is helping to give full attention on the main objects. I can't decide if I like the "cut off" persons on the right side. Let's see what the others think. Keep posting. Yours, Jan